Howdy! Whether you've read something of mine on the forums, interacted with me on the server, or whatever other possible permutation of exposure, I hope it was a positive experience. This is a feedback page and repository for information on all of my characters I have on the server. Feel free to contact me over PM, Skype, or email. Have a great day!
Gu Tao Coalition Officer Name: Gu Tao Occupation: Sirius Coalition Revolutionary Army officer Nationality: Coalition Rank: Cadet, SCRA Age: 22 Height: 1.68m (5'6") Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Brown Weight: 79.3kg (175lbs) DOB: 15th of June, 803 AS, Planet Jiangxi, Omega-52
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Gu.Tao (Insurgent)
Biography
Stories and Articles
Alaric Favager Gallic Officer Name: Alaric Jean-Paul Favager d'Astier Occupation: Gallic Royal Navy officer Nationality: Gallic Rank: Colonel, GRN Age: 36 Height: 1.88m (6'2") Hair Color: Blond Eye Color: Brown Weight: 75.3kg (166lbs) DOB: 21st of April, 789 AS (704 AGS), Planet Marne, Champagne
Known vessels
RNS-Chanzy (in progress)
Biography
Stories and Articles
Ed Kirk Libertonian Officer Name: Edward Dulles Kirk Occupation: Liberty Navy officer Nationality: Libertonian Rank: Commander, LN Age: 27 Height: 1.68m (5'6") Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Green Weight: 83.5kg (184lbs) DOB: 9th of July, 798 AS, Planet Los Angeles, California
Known vessels
LNS-Seattle (in progress)
Biography
Stories and Articles
Rodney O'Hannigan Bretonian Officer Name: Rodney Royce O'Hannigan Occupation: Bretonian Armed Forces officer Nationality: Bretonian Rank: Ensign, BAF Age: 23 Height: 1.68m (5'6") Hair Color: Ginger Eye Color: Light blue Weight: 76.2kg (168lbs) DOB: 2nd of August, 802 AS, Planet New London, New London
I've just caught sight of your in-progress story, Ten Thousand Years of the Kusari Republic, and seeing a nice big feedback link in your signature, thought I'd come chip in as this thread is sadly empty!
I'm really enjoying the story so far, and I think it's fantastically written. The characters are engaging and you're particularly good at conveying their moods and atmospheres. Keep it up! I can't wait to read further and see where Kyoko's adventures take her and the crew of the Chokai. You can consider me an interested reader who'll eagerly follow your work . I'm especially fond of your attention to detail with ranks, names, procedure etc. - it just makes the story all that more immersive!
Thanks muchly for the kind words! I admit I've relegated the story to languish for quite some time - I expected many, many more chapters of this story would be done by this time when I began many moons ago - but I'm feeling better about getting into the groove, so that means more updates, and longer ones.
I hope you like where the story will take them, and I hope whatever prowess I have continues to deliver to your satisfaction. Thanks again for chiming in!
That's a cool story right there. I enjoyed reading it. Although, you may try to give it some deeper formatting, eg. highlighting the spoken parts with different shade of color and may e dropping a picture there and there (:
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. I'm especially fond of your attention to detail with ranks, names, procedure etc. - it just makes the story all that more immersive!![[Image: bowexbar.jpg]](https://i.postimg.cc/1R6XD32v/bowexbar.jpg)
