Suppy's Feedback Thread

[SupcommMonroee]

Feedback and Character Information

Howdy! Whether you've read something of mine on the forums, interacted with me on the server, or whatever other possible permutation of exposure, I hope it was a positive experience. This is a feedback page and repository for information on all of my characters I have on the server. Feel free to contact me over PM, Skype, or email. Have a great day!

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Characters

Royce O'Hannigan
Bretonian Civilian

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Name: Royce O'Hannigan
Occupation: Bowex freighter captain
Nationality: Bretonian
Rank: Lieutenant (BAF, Ret.)
Age: 86
Height: 1.78m (5'10")
Hair Color: Grey
Eye Color: Brown
Weight: 73.9kg (163lbs)
DOB: 11th of February, 739 AS, Planet Leeds, Leeds

Known vessels

1. Royce.O'Hannigan (Large Train)
   

Biography


Stories and Articles



Kyōko Honda
Kusari Officer

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Name: Kyōko Honda
Occupation: Imperial Kusari Navy officer
Nationality: Kusari
Rank: Itto-Kaisa, IKN
Age: 32
Height: 1.85m (6'1")
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Weight: 65.3kg (144lbs)
DOB: 3rd of November, 793 AS, Planet Junyo, Shikoku

Known vessels

1. IKN-Hiei (in progress)
   

Biography


Stories and Articles

1. Ten Thousand Years of the Kusari Republic
   

Gu Tao
Coalition Officer

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Name: Gu Tao
Occupation: Sirius Coalition Revolutionary Army officer
Nationality: Coalition
Rank: Cadet, SCRA
Age: 22
Height: 1.68m (5'6")
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Weight: 79.3kg (175lbs)
DOB: 15th of June, 803 AS, Planet Jiangxi, Omega-52

Known vessels

1. Gu.Tao (Insurgent)
   

Biography


Stories and Articles

Alaric Favager
Gallic Officer

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Name: Alaric Jean-Paul Favager d'Astier
Occupation: Gallic Royal Navy officer
Nationality: Gallic
Rank: Colonel, GRN
Age: 36
Height: 1.88m (6'2")
Hair Color: Blond
Eye Color: Brown
Weight: 75.3kg (166lbs)
DOB: 21st of April, 789 AS (704 AGS), Planet Marne, Champagne

Known vessels

1. RNS-Chanzy (in progress)
   

Biography


Stories and Articles

Ed Kirk
Libertonian Officer

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Name: Edward Dulles Kirk
Occupation: Liberty Navy officer
Nationality: Libertonian
Rank: Commander, LN
Age: 27
Height: 1.68m (5'6")
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Green
Weight: 83.5kg (184lbs)
DOB: 9th of July, 798 AS, Planet Los Angeles, California

Known vessels

1. LNS-Seattle (in progress)
   

Biography


Stories and Articles

Rodney O'Hannigan
Bretonian Officer

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Name: Rodney Royce O'Hannigan
Occupation: Bretonian Armed Forces officer
Nationality: Bretonian
Rank: Ensign, BAF
Age: 23
Height: 1.68m (5'6")
Hair Color: Ginger
Eye Color: Light blue
Weight: 76.2kg (168lbs)
DOB: 2nd of August, 802 AS, Planet New London, New London

Known vessels

1. BAF|R.O'Hannigan (Templar)
   

Biography


Stories and Articles

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Feedback

Royce.O'Hannigan / KDS-Hiei

"Real G's move in silence like lasagna."

[Valarin]

I've just caught sight of your in-progress story, Ten Thousand Years of the Kusari Republic, and seeing a nice big feedback link in your signature, thought I'd come chip in as this thread is sadly empty!

I'm really enjoying the story so far, and I think it's fantastically written. The characters are engaging and you're particularly good at conveying their moods and atmospheres. Keep it up! I can't wait to read further and see where Kyoko's adventures take her and the crew of the Chokai. You can consider me an interested reader who'll eagerly follow your work . I'm especially fond of your attention to detail with ranks, names, procedure etc. - it just makes the story all that more immersive!

Great work!
- V.

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Valarin: Characters & Feedback

[SupcommMonroee]

Thanks muchly for the kind words! I admit I've relegated the story to languish for quite some time - I expected many, many more chapters of this story would be done by this time when I began many moons ago - but I'm feeling better about getting into the groove, so that means more updates, and longer ones.

I hope you like where the story will take them, and I hope whatever prowess I have continues to deliver to your satisfaction. Thanks again for chiming in!

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Feedback

Royce.O'Hannigan / KDS-Hiei

"Real G's move in silence like lasagna."

[Epo]

That's a cool story right there. I enjoyed reading it. Although, you may try to give it some deeper formatting, eg. highlighting the spoken parts with different shade of color and may e dropping a picture there and there (: