Well the second part/episode or whatever, it doesn't even matter, the second story definately is "creepier" however something that has concerned me is, if this is only forum RP its kind of lame :S you should RP it on the server as well, however to follow up to the story you must have awesome and I really mean AWESOME PvP skills.
That was kind of off-topic-ish.. anyway I like it as long as there isn't anymore dull bounties.. what you can do is, describe the person/thing or whatever and then list why there is a bounty on him/her/it and such things, not just killing...... unless the "Gas Mask" is a killer but then he belongs in the Phantom faction.. not as a mercenary...
' Wrote:That was kind of off-topic-ish.. anyway I like it as long as there isn't anymore dull bounties.. what you can do is, describe the person/thing or whatever and then list why there is a bounty on him/her/it and such things, not just killing...... unless the "Gas Mask" is a killer but then he belongs in the Phantom faction.. not as a mercenary...
Your hunger for RP is noted. And the "GAS MASK- behind the mask" is being written, the first piece to describe him/ Give him a background