' Wrote:That's nothing i even know captain ingame who's Underaged (17 year old ) Dont you think that's strange?
That doesn't mean it's good RP.
Dreds and Battleships are meant to be rarer then you think, any admiralty board would make combat experience a MUST before handing over one of their finest ships.
If you have time you should develop your character more and make him actually interesting instead of another Lolberty captain with a dread that likes PVP.
Jeremy Hunter and his twin sister, Ellie, were five years old when it happened. THey were helping a chemist, Elana Storm, with Lab work, as both were very helpful.
Thats when it went wrong.
A vial spilled, a chemical shot up, and the twins were drenched.
They thought everything was alrught, but no.
The next day, the two had grown in age. By two years. As Elena worked for a cure, the two aged. When thier bodies were ten, tiwce the age of two month ago, Elena gave the Hunter parents a way. Cryogenic suspension.
801 AS: Jeremy awoke with his sister during the Nomad war. Elana had made a cure, which seemed to work.
Jeremy was awake long enough to meet his new younger sister, Rika, and learn of his father's passing during the War. Jeremy then joined the Order, flying as Alpha 3 in the attack on the Dyson Sphere in Omicron Major. He then returned and was in the Order until Sius Malacos arrived. Jeremy served under Sius for a short while, then...
The symptoms returned, forcing the twins back into Cryogneic suspension, along with Rika, who refused to age beyond her beloved older brother. The three Hunter children slept for 16 years, finally waking when Elana had made the perfect cure. It worked, thier ages refused to accelerate alarmingly, but there wasa side-efect.
Jeremy and Ellie would stay at the ages of 19, the age thier bodies were before the second Cryo sleep cycle.
When they woke, they went about thier lives, and they met friends who understood and respected them.
Expcet one of them, named Isabella Archer, knew Jeremy. Jeremy had met her when she was ten, a reckless tomboy who's white dress was torn just above the knee and who's dirt streaked face stole his heart. Comforting in the fact he would be going back into cryosleep and maybe would meet her again, Jeremy parted with a small ruffle of Izzy's hair and a charm necklace of a heart.
THen it all changed in 817 AS, when Izzy and Ellie disappeared, leaving a heartbroken Jeremy on LA to care for Rika by himself. Finally, he left to the Order, who had contacted him again. Before Liberty had turned against the Order, Jeremy had join during a brief test of his body. He returned to the Order, ready to return to Primary with Sius, who had acpeted him.
Thats when it happened. He learned Sius had been taken by the Noamds, and Jeremy was refused acceptance back into Primary.
This should clear up why the hell Jeremy is 19 an a Major in the Order Secondary fleet with his own Crusier. For info on other aspects, refer to my story Life and Lies.
And I will make sure you DONT FORGET Vex. What are friends for:P
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