It's a really good start, let me put it that way, but I think it would be simpler to start the model from scratch again. Fewer curves, more angles, similar design features, but more BHG and less Corona frigate. It can become considerably more skeletal, methinks. Needs curved rows of glass stuck in there somewhere, and multiple curved deck structures. Engines also need considerable work. Bridge should be angularized. Think along those lines.
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' Wrote:It's a really good start, let me put it that way, but I think it would be simpler to start the model from scratch again. Fewer curves, more angles, similar design features, but more BHG and less Corona frigate. It can become considerably more skeletal, methinks. Needs curved rows of glass stuck in there somewhere, and multiple curved deck structures. Engines also need considerable work. Bridge should be angularized. Think along those lines.
Listen to this man. He's smart, and it shows. Try simplifying the design radically, then go ahead from there. Or if you want, start completely from scratch. The hangar bays are probably an unnecessary use of polys, too. Nice, but not necessary, and I think your time could be better spent on other, more important parts of the ship.
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Instead of fighters in the 'hanger' why not put cargo pods in the gap, and have the infocard edited so it reads that they're external prisoner containment pods, partly to keep the most dangerous criminals away from the crew, and partly to dissuade criminals from attacking the BB, and thus their kin.
Well look at this, progression, first model was kinda crapy... but now this;)Tic you're improving quite rapidly... work on it some more, hone it to perfection and submit it within the deadline...
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