Just finished reading through the faction's threads this morning and I think Jammi has the majority of points covered. The few things I can suggest in regards to the faction info page is add detail, a small list of ships and tech that you use may interest a few people, adding a paragraph on each of your goals would help too, just a few lines to give an overview of how the Hogosha operate (or could potentially).
One thing that has piqued my interest is the "special conditions" section of your diplo, a bit of description on that would work wonders.
