Smeagle Feedback

[SaraOConnel]

I wouldn't say HE is generic and cliche, it's just his reactions and actions were awfully over and melodramatic and cliche. The RP I saw in the newer thread with Smeagle's cure and such was strikingly better. Sorry if I offended you in any way.

[Hangman]

The following constructive criticism doesn't apply specifically to you but also to many others: writting original story takes efforts, finding an original, not borrowed, character name just takes a little more effort.

[Death.RunningVerminator]

The following constructive criticism doesn't apply specifically to you but also to many others: writting original story takes efforts, finding an original, not borrowed, character name just takes a little more effort.

I'd like you to show me where/how i used another name for my character, rather than an original one.

[Hangman]

Lord of The Rings.

[Death.RunningVerminator]

Yes, what about it?

Also. Please review the rules, trolling is not allowed. And since this is in my thread, instead of you making your own thread saying this 'generally' as you claim to have done, it looks like you're attempting to troll me. Sorry, big sentence.

[Korny]

Actually bothered to read through a small amount of stuff, looks solid.

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[Death.RunningVerminator]

Actually bothered to read through a small amount of stuff, looks solid.

See, hangman, this is an example of constructive criticism.