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[Serpentis]

Right, heres the last versions then;)

Unless you want something changed.

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[Birdtalon]

Here we go; this is my lil attempt.

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[mrgrey]

Serpentis: only 2 last change and yar done with 2 competitors:
on the second pic, I would like you to put the logo int the middle line of that (the right) side. Just keep equal distance between the logo and the upper and lower borders(possibly the logo can be minimally bigger). Its just hurts my eyes that its closer to the bottom line.
Plus i'd really like to see that red designed one with the rusty border from your wery first attempt. With this 2 change Ill be statisfied.

Birdtalon: cheers for started helping me out. I REALLY like your work. (my Gf voted on yar sign already).
But I'd need a few changes form ya.
1.please remove teh green glowing from the guy's eyes. I like it, but unfortunately my char has no light in his cyber-eye.
2. see this pic.:
edited with pain-T

I screwed yar art but marked a few stuff.
Please try to make the blade slimmer at the marked spot close to the handle. But keep it symetric at both edge.
I love the quotes text format. Maybe you could remove some of the shining from the top of the blade what the man holds and could make it a few pixels...thinner at the point.
I think thats all as first wiev...

Cheers for helping me. Really
I wont be ungrateful.

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Song of Grey (aka My friends, from ,,SweeneyTodd,,)

[Birdtalon]

Okey dokeys

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[Birdtalon]

Old one:



New one:



Changes:

I removed the green eyes.
Removed the hand and arm, added some blood in it's place.
I made the dagger narrower at the hilt like you said.
I shuffled the text around a little, there was an arrow pointing up from it on your image, I didn't know if you wanted it moved but I did so anyway.
I thinned the blade and removed a little of the blood, now it looks like a thin jagged point. (It is a little thin, I could broaden it again a bit if you wanted, but that's your decision)

Birdy

PS: O KWL - ADMIN GREEN!

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[mrgrey]

ahh wery good. only a few stuff remained: plese broaden the blade, only its point should be this thin. remove the blood from it (I mean the small blade in the hand of the guy) and turn down the shining on it (just let a small shimmer I think)

And I would like you to colour the cloth of the guy a lot greyer. it is white with shades now. It should be grey or dark grey with shades.
Otherwise we are almost there.

Ahh and a possible thing: could you re-design the point of the huge dagger-border to make it look even slimmer?

Thats all and I think we are ready with this one.

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Song of Grey (aka My friends, from ,,SweeneyTodd,,)

[Birdtalon]

Ok, I'll do that when I can.

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[mrgrey]

cheers. take your time. We have plenty of it.

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Song of Grey (aka My friends, from ,,SweeneyTodd,,)

[Hundra]

V2, tell me what you need changed.

[Revan]

Well Here is an update -



Blood - Blood and more Blood - =D

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