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Your SRP is highly inconsistant which I have various questions for it's consistancies - most of which still continue up to this day due to the holes in the RP, which I waited on to see if they were ever filled in.
[SRP process]
-Why did they 'defect'? How is it being maintained?
-How did they leave? They were only a Paladin, and leaving with a Bullhead just because they said so, won't work at all, especially after the incident of the Eidolon Wraith. Security would be insanely high, and the Core are known for their loyalty when looking up to people.
-Why is RP entry for your Bullhead so similar to mine? (even copying the engine?! Which is outdated, it would be a lot slower, inefficient. ) A blatant copy of style and writing. Like come on! You literally CP the words I used! ([number]x [MANUFACTURE NUMBER] "name" [WEAPON TYPE] + Crew ranks - even the words were taken!) Scratch similar - why did you steal my way of RP?
-What's the point of going to Rheinland? What's the goal? What do they achieve with that? Why do they need a Bullhead for that?
-Why are they infested? (Yes, I know they helped out with the whole Alaska thing, as does the Order which brings a massive why and how to the next one. ) What purpose does it bring to the character?
-Why is the SRP already Order IFF'd without being remotely affiliated with them? Why would the Order let Rosalina near them when they're AWARE that she's infested? They were there for the Coronado mess, they were in contact with LN.
-Who repaired it? Not gave the shipyard access - but fully repaired and supplied with resources?
[RP Process]
-How did you get the Rheinland technology? Engines just simply aren't "dismounted" and then hauled, then "mounted" - same with the Weapons. Same with the Core turrets, you don't just 'unmount it' - as I watched you do so in Omicron Kappa. (And yes, I know, the Wilde provided it as a trade. But that still doesn't dismiss it. You don't simply la-de-la-haul parts, you pack it up, dismantle it. )
-Who's housing the refit? Who was engineering the equipment to come off?
-Why was there no powergrid adaption to the weapons? How do they know the internal specifics of the Bullhead?
-Why was Romanov in a coma then wakes up randomly pregnant with no partner or any occurance of a rape scenario (the character doesn't emotionally show it or even noted to their companions)?
-Nomads are referred to as Aliens. Why? If she was infested - she IS the alien in a meaty vehicle. Poor wording.
-2x bonus round. Why the hell is it Order?
This character is so inconsistant and so bad in general when it comes down to the character, story and involved parties, that it's painfully obvious that there are oorpdeals to further the RP by coincidentally 'ignoring' certain elements about the environment and the character history which is already acknowledged by the community and other official factions. I don't get how this was ever approved. It's a mess. It's also just... just so, lacking. Not to mention the stealing of content, that's /really/ bad, especially for an SRP'd character which is supposed to maintain higher standards of RP.
Please reconsider your roleplay, and please actually write your own content.