I am opening up this feedback thread to get feedback on my character story, that I am enjoying so far. This is the "Introduction" I have written up for her, but im sure it will change as the roleplay continues.
Introduction;
Rosalina Romanov was born on Planet Hamburg, Rheinland sector. She came from a poor but hard working family, and her father was killed at a young age. Her mother was a nurse on her home planet. Her father was a mercenary from Liberty who went to Rheinland and met Alana (Rosalina's) mother. Her father (Leon) became a Federal Police officer of Rheinland and was later shot down and killed by Nomads.
Not long after Rosalina went to university and studied forensic science where she later joined BDM and wanted to find and understand why her father was killed by these aliens. After a few years she was offered to become a pilot and a few years later joined The Core.
She joined The Core in hopeing they will be able to help her find out what she wanted to know but instead they used her as a weapon to kill innocent people on Freeport 11, shoot the Order and it was all due to greed and wanted to control the Omicrons. Rosalina later left the Core after working through the ranks and being promoted the same day she left. Her promotion was to rank Paladin but she was already in command of a warship known as The Olympius (Bullhead).
After leaving Core she started of by trying to amend things with organisations within the Omicron sector. Zoners, The Order mostly but not only them but groups that The Core and The Olympius have fired upon. From that moment she gets access to Freeport back in Omicron Theta to visit her mother. After visiting her mother she went back with the crew and the Olympius into Nomad Worlds and she came across a monstrosity the K'Hara Inanna Guardian. Who seeked revenge on the crew of the Olympius and Rosalina Romanov mostly. The Inanna Guardian wanted revenge for the fire she gave to the Guardian which later made it vanished and it came back bigger and stronger. Not only this but Olympius was heavily damaged and Rosalina Romanov was later captured.
As time goes on I will keep adding, stories, threads and communication threads for this character here so it is easier to access, people can have a read through.
I am willing to accept both negative, and positive feedback, but mostly I would prefer constructive and helpful feedback. I have never gone to this state before trying to roleplay character. I have done a attempt before which I feel has failed compared to this one.
[DSAce.Logs] ~ Just a saved copy of the ingame interactions which will be used for forum RP (Personal Use ONLY) [Wanted Logo and Transmission Bars] ~ Thread regarding a logo, symbol and trans bar that I am after.
Wesker is the 1 In Command of the Core| so I have gone to him via skype and requested permision to use the "Bullhead" Battlecruiser for my SRP which is in the future.
[8:44:50 PM] S H A G G Y: Hi Wesker, I know over recent months we've had our differences a hell of alot
[8:47:21 PM] S H A G G Y: I would firstly like to apologise for my actions I the Core| but Core was no longer for me from an OORP point of view and an inrp point of few.
"Rosalina was not comfortable in killing other humans, all she wanted was to research nomads." That is her reasons on leaving and taking the "Olympius Battlecruiser" with her. Why am I coming to you to try fix and amend things between us on an OORP level. Is because I wish to in the future SRP this ship as a personal ship. It will unlikely go to any faction but it will stay with Rosalina and her crew. I am sure you have seen my work I have put in over recent weeks and well this is my feedback thread -http://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=141840&pid=1806155#pid1806155- and well I would like to just get the necessary approval by 1IC| of Core| before I attempt anything else.
[8:51:22 PM] Wesker: Isn't roslina infected
[8:51:51 PM] S H A G G Y: No but yeah? I guess.
[8:51:58 PM | Edited 8:53:06 PM] S H A G G Y: Right now there is one person that knows and it is not me
[8:52:32 PM] S H A G G Y: It is a "Surprise SRP" you could say
[8:52:42 PM] S H A G G Y: I'm working closely with someone and they are leading the RP, not me
[8:53:38 PM] Wesker: Errr
[8:53:41 PM] Wesker: I mean
[8:53:56 PM] Wesker: I could care less Tbh since it's a bullhead
[8:54:11 PM] S H A G G Y: Okay, that is literally all I wanted to know.
[8:54:18 PM] Wesker: So w/e as long as u have good RP and aren't a shitter with it
[8:54:49 PM] S H A G G Y: Does it look like I'm doing bad RP and trying to shitter? I changed the ID put a Zoner ID on there and RPing with it.
To: The Order ~ Just informing them the ship is fully repaired and ready to assist them. To: Independent Miners Guild ~ Making contact and informing them assistance is there in the Omicrons if it is needed. To: Overlord Jared Nomak ~ Making first contact and requesting assistance to get intouch to Das Wilde. To OSI ~ Making first contact and asking about old scrapped transporters.
Weapon Exchange - The original request for Order technology in exchange for the Rheinland technology which cannot be maintained. Acceptance to Order| - ~ Approval and response from the Grand Admiral Golanski with acceptance to the primary fleet after proving there worth and loyalty to the Overwatch after being former Core. Thanking Grand Admiral Golanski - ~ Thread to the Grand Admiral, thanking him for allowing the changes for the Olympius to happen and to start work on the vessels that where in the drydocks of the Olympius. This will be a later request after enough RP has been done.
I'm not sure if you aimed for a Russian name or just liked Romanov, but generally in Slavic countries female last names end with an "a" so it should be Romanova if you were aiming for a slavic name. Just saying.
:::[Thank you for the feedback @"Bloodl1ke" , with your question about the name. I actaully quiet liked the name how i've spelt it. I did double question myself about if it was spelt right. If I were to change it, it would be difficult now considering how much roleplay I have put into this character over the few months of her being present.]:::
(11-10-2018, 02:46 PM)Sombra Hookier Wrote: Well, I guess if he doesn't want to answer the question, ooRPly, then Nomads can't know whether an infectee is controlling the ship. Meaning Nomads can shoot him freely.
and i'm aware who players are on this server from an oorp perspective, and i've been metagamed multitimes by certain players, so I would rather them find out through RP then an ooRP perspective. i've been shot at by Nomads, Wild before, but it's those who actually RP with me instead of go "Oh look there is a Order let's just pew it"
So RP with everyone and not just a small group of friends and you will actually find things out.
You don't understand, Shaggy. If your ship was controlled by an infectee, Nomads would know. K'Hara and Aoi wouldn't engage it because they would know via mindshare that there is a quasi-nomad-controlled ship out there, and the Vagrants would know too since there would be a notable nomad entity on that ship. If you don't want to tell it ooRPly, people can't know whether it is actually infected and thus not a target or not. Since you're stubbornly to not answer it and provide transparency OORPLY, I have to assume you're an eligible target.
There is a notable difference between inRP knowledge and ooRP knowledge.
(11-10-2018, 02:46 PM)Sombra Hookier Wrote: Well, I guess if he doesn't want to answer the question, ooRPly, then Nomads can't know whether an infectee is controlling the ship. Meaning Nomads can shoot him freely.
and i'm aware who players are on this server from an oorp perspective, and i've been metagamed multitimes by certain players, so I would rather them find out through RP then an ooRP perspective. i've been shot at by Nomads, Wild before, but it's those who actually RP with me instead of go "Oh look there is a Order let's just pew it"
So RP with everyone and not just a small group of friends and you will actually find things out.
You don't understand, Shaggy. If your ship was controlled by an infectee, Nomads would know. K'Hara and Aoi wouldn't engage it because they would know via mindshare that there is a quasi-nomad-controlled ship out there, and the Vagrants would know too since there would be a notable nomad entity on that ship. If you don't want to tell it ooRPly, people can't know whether it is actually infected and thus not a target or not. Since you're stubbornly to not answer it and provide transparency OORPLY, I have to assume you're an eligible target.
There is a notable difference between inRP knowledge and ooRP knowledge.
And if I am not mistaken. Everyone knows that "Rosalina Romanov" is infected. It's not something hidden. Commune are aware that she is infected. So are Das Wilde. Rosalina Romanov was approved through Das Wilde when they were first official and that is a start of how my SRP was approved in the first place.
There has been several encounters that my bullhead has helped and assisted Commune, Nomads and Wild players so it is not a hidden thing, it is known.
I have also sat there and RP'd with K'hara players talking inRP about the whole situation and my goal within the Order. I am not being stubborn, I would rather people find out inRP then ooRP, this is a RP server after all and the game we play is discovery.
If you wish to shoot me then shoot me, I will have to deal with it and figure my way out of a situation. Which is giving me a challenge inRP and helps me figure out what I have to do next.
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