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Akemi "Homura" Ando Feedback.
Offline Nika
05-18-2018, 11:37 PM, (This post was last modified: 06-17-2018, 09:33 AM by Nika.)
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"Homura"

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Birthplace: Planet Kyushu.
Age, date of birth: 24 y.o., 10.10.801 A.S.
Height: 150 cm.
Weight: 46 kg.
Real name: Akemi Ando.
Previous affiliation(s): Kyushu State Institue of Xenoarcheology, Augus Clan.The Hideyoshi Shogunate.
Current affiliation: Blood Dragons, Clan Ando.


Subject is known for having close ties to the Daimyo Augus in the past, back in the times before they have turned to Blood Dragons and given up on everything they have had in their past lives. It is certainly known that subject first encountered Sakurai Augus during her studies in the school, during the time past this mark they have developed quite close relations and eventually became "best friends", with that friendship actually lasting longer than any other relationship in their yet short but saturated lives.

Upon graduating the university and boarding the same vessel that was going off for Corfu base, where the Xenoarcheological expedition was supposed to stay for the time being, it was decided to keep Akemi's demise in secret, and as secretly make her way towards Kyoto between the Dragons or Naval patrol schedules, where she disguised herself as a common local Dragon with which Kyoto was always heavily populated. Until the time the eventual uprising happened and Sakurai claimed her new title in the Shogunate, became a Daimyo - Akemi stood strictly still and only participated in actions under the colors of the main branch, not showing off her affiliation towards the newly born Clan representative in any way.

As multiple months have passed and Augus have proven itself to have a confident stance among the other Shogunate Clans - Akemi Ando have finally left the shadows and was declared and acknowledged openly by Sakurai as Daimyo's right hand and representative, even through Lady Augus still held most of the negotiations in person - Homura have proven to efficiently deal with inter-Clan affairs and in maintenance and command of Sakurai own battleship - Kirishima.

As the time have been passing - the conditions went grim for Akemi, especially with the Augus Clan demise and her Sister first considered M.I.A, then confirmed to fall to the infection and turning into an acting Aoi Iseijin operative; this forces Homura to leave her Bretheren for the time being, barely notifying anyone on where she's heading and if she's ever going to come back, apparently the stress of loosing so much in a short period of time made it even through her psychological barriers and affected her mind, demanding the necessarity to stay away from all the society for quite some time. Nothing is known about Akemi and what was she doing during that period of time, but in approximately three weeks she came back, and once again pledged her loyalty to The Shogun, having no desire to be affiliated with any Clans ever again, unless an unique opportunity rises to her attention.


Psychological profiling.

Temperament: Phlegmatic person.

Compared to her elder Dragon Sister, Akemi tends to maintain a much more cool attitude towards almost everything, despite her young age she is almost emotionless and provides a first impression of a person that have seen enough during her life to be surprised by literally nothing, unless it's a real, living dragon with scales and fangs emering right before her eyes; have proven to be a smart person with a bright mind, usually overseeing Sakurai's ideas and giving them a better shape that it initially was provided by Lady Augus imagination and hot head in combination, giving it a more... realistic look, she took a part in most of the Augus large projects, affecting it in that or another way. Usually doesn't speak much, but unwavering resolve can be heard in her voice, along with impressive tranquility of a person that doesn't allow her emotions to drive her into insufficient conclusions and pointless disputes.


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AKEMI 'HOMURA' ANDO COMMUNICATION HUB

  • Internal communications.

  • Asai Clan discussion with an inside contact.
  • Proposition of a new Clan to The Shogun.
  • Akiko Miku: Presentation and invitation.
  • A call to the supporters. Invitation and proposition.
  • "Speaking of a bait..."
  • "Accident of a filthy Gaijin."

  • External communications.

  • "A call to Yubokumin."
  • Encouragement of the assault on Nagano.
  • Daimyo assistance request. A first word of truth.
  • The Lane Hackers assistance request. Countering possible Ageira influence on Nagano operation.
  • Blood Dragons - Natio Octavarium direct channel. Opening the relations.
  • "Geisha" Kusari Luxury Yacht requistion. Acquiring reward for The Lane Hackers.
  • Communication burst from Johnatan Kalh of Battlegroup Scarabeus regarding the Nomad infection of Liberty agents and officers. Discussion.
  • Private secure channel with Kiyoshi Akira, former Hogosha associate.
  • Inquiring with Natio Octavarium and Crayter republic about modular base construction in Tau-44.
  • Ouroboros first formal contact.
  • Mining contract.

  • Other communications.

  • 'Returning Sister' notification for Shogunate.
  • Homura personal data dump - for thoughts, concerns, plans, and other oddities.

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AKEMI 'HOMURA' ANDO PERSONAL ENCOUNTERS HUB

  • Blood Dragons internal encounters.

  • Audience with Shogun Hideyoshi. Discussion of Nagano Assault.

  • External encounters.


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Akemi "Homura" Ando Feedback. - by Nika - 05-18-2018, 11:37 PM

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