Difference between revisions of "Talk:Bounty Hunter Legion"
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Revision as of 10:48, 20 May 2008
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All occurances of 'we' should be removed. Articles should be from a neutral third person point of view.
Nodwick 11:46, 19 May 2008 (GMT)
Ok sorry about that I work on it.
Mike Fire 09:47, 20 May 2008 (GMT)
I think that is right now. I changed the "we" to "they". Should I put more info about the members ships and about the faction ?
Mike Fire 10:00, 20 May 2008 (GMT)
That would definately be good. Everything someone would like to know about the guild is nice. What I personally miss is a short overview at the top, allies/enemies, ships/equipment and joining information (including a link to the recruiting thread).
Nodwick 10:48, 20 May 2008 (GMT)
