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| + | :For spelling and grammar edits, please see [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Minor_edit Wikipedia - Minor Edits]. | ||
| + | :As for the the wording; I'm not sure, but I'm going to ask in the wiki editors skype chat about this. | ||
| + | :--[[User:Alex|Alex]] 10:19, 11 February 2010 (MST) | ||
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| + | :I believe the 10 pilots were codenamed the "Fallen Angels," not the threat. The wording was ambiguous, I think I have made it more clear. | ||
| + | :-- [[User:Eyvind|Eyvind]] ([[User_talk:Eyvind|Talk]]) 10:27, 11 February 2010 (MST) | ||
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| + | Hmmm. This page definitely needs a synopsis or brief description of the RoS at the top. Also, all the history should go in a history section and the years should be sub headings. --[[User:Tazuras|Tazuras]] 09:44, 7 April 2010 (MDT) | ||
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Edited some spelling and Grammar:
But im confused - there is a logic error in the outline of the story; it initially says that 10 pilots were created to "counteract" (ie fight) a Coalition threat named the "Fallen Angels" - Later, it seems that these 10 pilots and their descendants are the Fallen Angels?
That needs to be reworded somehow.. doesn't make sense at the moment.
Laowai
- For spelling and grammar edits, please see Wikipedia - Minor Edits.
- As for the the wording; I'm not sure, but I'm going to ask in the wiki editors skype chat about this.
- --Alex 10:19, 11 February 2010 (MST)
- I believe the 10 pilots were codenamed the "Fallen Angels," not the threat. The wording was ambiguous, I think I have made it more clear.
- -- Eyvind (Talk) 10:27, 11 February 2010 (MST)
Hmmm. This page definitely needs a synopsis or brief description of the RoS at the top. Also, all the history should go in a history section and the years should be sub headings. --Tazuras 09:44, 7 April 2010 (MDT)
