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| name = *DONOTCHANGE*
 
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| origin = {{House Link | Bretonia}} - [[Planet Cambridge]]  
 
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In midnight...just due to some kind of noise, the baby burst into tears...and cried very loudly
 
In midnight...just due to some kind of noise, the baby burst into tears...and cried very loudly
"Krismar, dont cry my little sweetheart" Said his mother.
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"*DONOTCHANGE*, dont cry my little sweetheart" Said his mother.
  
 
4 years later...
 
4 years later...
  
Very hot and sunny day,a little wind was blowing. Krismar and his dog Rex were playing at the backyard of their house.
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Very hot and sunny day,a little wind was blowing. *DONOTCHANGE* and his dog Rex were playing at the backyard of their house.
 
Suddenly, the sun disapappeared behind a cloud, it went dark...started raining and
 
Suddenly, the sun disapappeared behind a cloud, it went dark...started raining and
 
thunder was heard. At this time a black car stopped in front of their house.
 
thunder was heard. At this time a black car stopped in front of their house.
 
three men in black suit came out of the car, wearing hats and glasses...this seemed very strange
 
three men in black suit came out of the car, wearing hats and glasses...this seemed very strange
They immediately moved into the house, one of the men took out a gun.."boom"..Krismar's
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They immediately moved into the house, one of the men took out a gun.."boom"..*DONOTCHANGE*'s
 
dad fell down...cluthing at his chest.
 
dad fell down...cluthing at his chest.
  
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While tears were falling...sarah grabbed some important items as her purse, a little suitcase
 
While tears were falling...sarah grabbed some important items as her purse, a little suitcase
with clothes, she ran into the yard and took Krismar, and then left their home.
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with clothes, she ran into the yard and took *DONOTCHANGE*, and then left their home.
  
 
...A tragedy happened that evening...Sarah tried to figure out why was her husband killed..
 
...A tragedy happened that evening...Sarah tried to figure out why was her husband killed..
 
also..she wants a vengeance.
 
also..she wants a vengeance.
  
They lived in hotel "Ritz" and Sarah worked at the local mall. Krismar was studying in a regular high school.
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They lived in hotel "Ritz" and Sarah worked at the local mall. *DONOTCHANGE* was studying in a regular high school.
Krismar was at home, sitting behind a desk, drinking whiskey and thinking
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*DONOTCHANGE* was at home, sitting behind a desk, drinking whiskey and thinking
 
about his life, soon he realised that it was kinda late, 10:00 pm, and his mother hasn't still come home.
 
about his life, soon he realised that it was kinda late, 10:00 pm, and his mother hasn't still come home.
 
He started to worry about that, watched out of the window..lights were flashing everywhere, hoping his mother
 
He started to worry about that, watched out of the window..lights were flashing everywhere, hoping his mother
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Shaking in panic and sitting on the roof...he decided to escape the hotel.
 
Shaking in panic and sitting on the roof...he decided to escape the hotel.
  
Krismar had no where to go, lived as a homeless teenager.
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*DONOTCHANGE* had no where to go, lived as a homeless teenager.
  
 
after couple of moths...
 
after couple of moths...
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Krismar woke up at the place he fell asleep. Having a thinking look on his face, he gets up,
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*DONOTCHANGE* woke up at the place he fell asleep. Having a thinking look on his face, he gets up,
 
and thinks himself
 
and thinks himself
  
 
"Enough, it's time to find out what is going on, i can't run for the rest of my life"
 
"Enough, it's time to find out what is going on, i can't run for the rest of my life"
  
Hour after another, it goes dark outside, Krismar figuring out a plan.
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Hour after another, it goes dark outside, *DONOTCHANGE* figuring out a plan.
 
He's sneaking in the streets, trying to hide from everyone, at midnight he's
 
He's sneaking in the streets, trying to hide from everyone, at midnight he's
 
moving near The Police Department.
 
moving near The Police Department.
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"I have to do it, there's no other way..."
 
"I have to do it, there's no other way..."
  
and Krismar attacks the police officer from behind and hits him in the head with a wooden stick.
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and *DONOTCHANGE* attacks the police officer from behind and hits him in the head with a wooden stick.
 
trailing him quietly but quickly into a dark corner of the street, checking his pockets and finds
 
trailing him quietly but quickly into a dark corner of the street, checking his pockets and finds
 
a plastic card with a code written on it
 
a plastic card with a code written on it
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found something he was looking for, information of the investigation about his family.
 
found something he was looking for, information of the investigation about his family.
  
Krismar's reading a bit of the following text and finds out that his dad was working for pirate faction(s), not
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*DONOTCHANGE*'s reading a bit of the following text and finds out that his dad was working for pirate faction(s), not
 
sure which one(s) but suspecting a group called "Mollys". His dad, Paul, gathered them
 
sure which one(s) but suspecting a group called "Mollys". His dad, Paul, gathered them
 
information about whatever they needed to. He had a bounty on his head, and a mercenary (Name: CLASSIFIED)
 
information about whatever they needed to. He had a bounty on his head, and a mercenary (Name: CLASSIFIED)
 
collected it. Although there's no information about his mother.
 
collected it. Although there's no information about his mother.
  
While reading this, Krismar's face is got a sad look, tears were falling. But the information he received about his
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While reading this, *DONOTCHANGE*'s face is got a sad look, tears were falling. But the information he received about his
 
family and all that hunting made him satisfied. Still wondered....
 
family and all that hunting made him satisfied. Still wondered....
  
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"Easy there boy." Said an old man from the other side of the room.
 
"Easy there boy." Said an old man from the other side of the room.
  
Krismar was a bit scared...until he noticed he is safe.
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*DONOTCHANGE* was a bit scared...until he noticed he is safe.
  
"Who are you, why am i here?" Asked Krismar desperately.
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"Who are you, why am i here?" Asked *DONOTCHANGE* desperately.
  
 
"The name is Jonathan, just Jonathan, and i saved you from the police" replied the old man.
 
"The name is Jonathan, just Jonathan, and i saved you from the police" replied the old man.
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"....I...thank you a lot Mr. Jonathan, my name is..."
 
"....I...thank you a lot Mr. Jonathan, my name is..."
  
"I know who you are son, and i also know about your family. Your life is complicated Krismar,
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"I know who you are son, and i also know about your family. Your life is complicated *DONOTCHANGE*,
 
local bounty hunters killed both of your parents, and now the police is looking for you
 
local bounty hunters killed both of your parents, and now the police is looking for you
 
because you broke in to the Police Department, you know...all newspapers writing about you son." Explained Jonathan.
 
because you broke in to the Police Department, you know...all newspapers writing about you son." Explained Jonathan.
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you into a safe place, they'll be here soon"
 
you into a safe place, they'll be here soon"
  
After 10 minutes, they hear a sound of a copter. Jonathan and Krismar goin onto the roof.
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After 10 minutes, they hear a sound of a copter. Jonathan and *DONOTCHANGE* goin onto the roof.
  
 
"But why are you helping me Jonathan?
 
"But why are you helping me Jonathan?
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"Because i knew your father very well, there's no time to talk about this, now go son, don't watch back."
 
"Because i knew your father very well, there's no time to talk about this, now go son, don't watch back."
  
Krismar listens to Jonathan, and enters the copter. He feels much better and safely...having a smile on his face..
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*DONOTCHANGE* listens to Jonathan, and enters the copter. He feels much better and safely...having a smile on his face..
  
 
"Finally something good happened to me."
 
"Finally something good happened to me."
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4 Years Later..
 
4 Years Later..
  
Krismar was taken to Omega-49...to start a new life...completely new life.
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*DONOTCHANGE* was taken to Omega-49...to start a new life...completely new life.
 
After a very long trip, he found himself on Planet Gran Canaria.
 
After a very long trip, he found himself on Planet Gran Canaria.
 
Started working as an equipment dealer. He learned much about weapons and vessels.
 
Started working as an equipment dealer. He learned much about weapons and vessels.
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Suddenly..one day Zoner patrols received a message about an incident at Freeport 9.
 
Suddenly..one day Zoner patrols received a message about an incident at Freeport 9.
 
Engineers, medics and repairing ships were needed, but the bases near Freeport 9 did not have enough
 
Engineers, medics and repairing ships were needed, but the bases near Freeport 9 did not have enough
equipment needed. Krismar also went to help fellow Zoners. A Rescuing group launched as fast as possible
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equipment needed. *DONOTCHANGE* also went to help fellow Zoners. A Rescuing group launched as fast as possible
 
from Planet Gran Canaria. It was a long trip to Omicron Theta system. Finally they arrived at Freeport 9,
 
from Planet Gran Canaria. It was a long trip to Omicron Theta system. Finally they arrived at Freeport 9,
 
the station had been attacked, smoke and flames were everywhere. People who got hurt were taken back to
 
the station had been attacked, smoke and flames were everywhere. People who got hurt were taken back to
Gran Canaria. With help of The Order, the station was repaired, Krismar payed his roll there too.
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Gran Canaria. With help of The Order, the station was repaired, *DONOTCHANGE* payed his roll there too.
  
After everything was fine again, Krismar was having a drink in the bar of freeport 9. Sitting alone behind a table.
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After everything was fine again, *DONOTCHANGE* was having a drink in the bar of freeport 9. Sitting alone behind a table.
 
Then, a man entered the bar, a man named John Chrichton (one of the zoners who founded the Zoners Trading Consortium).
 
Then, a man entered the bar, a man named John Chrichton (one of the zoners who founded the Zoners Trading Consortium).
 
He was looking around in the bar, finally his eyes stopped
 
He was looking around in the bar, finally his eyes stopped
at Krismar, then walked next to him, introduced himself:
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at *DONOTCHANGE*, then walked next to him, introduced himself:
  
 
"Greetings Mr.Raag, my name is John Chrichton"
 
"Greetings Mr.Raag, my name is John Chrichton"
  
"Hello Mr.Chrichton. What can i do for you?" Asked Krismar.
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"Hello Mr.Chrichton. What can i do for you?" Asked *DONOTCHANGE*.
  
 
"I'm here to invite you to The Consortium" Replied John slowly.
 
"I'm here to invite you to The Consortium" Replied John slowly.
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They had a long conversation, later Mr.Chrichton introduced other members of the consortium.
 
They had a long conversation, later Mr.Chrichton introduced other members of the consortium.
Krismar accepted the invitation and became a part of it.
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*DONOTCHANGE* accepted the invitation and became a part of it.
  
In 4 months, Krismar had a family and wanted to enjoy his further life with his wife Jessica and his daughter Jane.
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In 4 months, *DONOTCHANGE* had a family and wanted to enjoy his further life with his wife Jessica and his daughter Jane.
But...something made Krismar to come back...did he miss to fly in space? Work in a station? Probaly yes.
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But...something made *DONOTCHANGE* to come back...did he miss to fly in space? Work in a station? Probaly yes.
 
He joined back the Consortium now, and seems like he will never leave.
 
He joined back the Consortium now, and seems like he will never leave.
  
  
 
[[Category: Player Characters]]
 
[[Category: Player Characters]]

Revision as of 21:03, 8 March 2015

*DONOTCHANGE*
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Origin Flag-bretonia.png Bretonia - Planet Cambridge
Occupation Zoner Guard
Affiliation Zoners Trading Consortium
Rank Shipmaster
Born unknown
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Biography

Chapter I - Childhood

Location: Cambridge Hospital

There he came...a beautiful baby boy, crying and crying. Little skinny kid. His father and mother were very happy.

after a couple of days, they returned home, to celebrate the birth of the child. If the party was over, everyone were so tired and just fell asleep.

In midnight...just due to some kind of noise, the baby burst into tears...and cried very loudly "*DONOTCHANGE*, dont cry my little sweetheart" Said his mother.

4 years later...

Very hot and sunny day,a little wind was blowing. *DONOTCHANGE* and his dog Rex were playing at the backyard of their house. Suddenly, the sun disapappeared behind a cloud, it went dark...started raining and thunder was heard. At this time a black car stopped in front of their house. three men in black suit came out of the car, wearing hats and glasses...this seemed very strange They immediately moved into the house, one of the men took out a gun.."boom"..*DONOTCHANGE*'s dad fell down...cluthing at his chest.

"Noo Paul...noooo!" Sarah cried and hugged her husband, there was blood everywhere.

While tears were falling...sarah grabbed some important items as her purse, a little suitcase with clothes, she ran into the yard and took *DONOTCHANGE*, and then left their home.

...A tragedy happened that evening...Sarah tried to figure out why was her husband killed.. also..she wants a vengeance.

They lived in hotel "Ritz" and Sarah worked at the local mall. *DONOTCHANGE* was studying in a regular high school.

  • DONOTCHANGE* was at home, sitting behind a desk, drinking whiskey and thinking

about his life, soon he realised that it was kinda late, 10:00 pm, and his mother hasn't still come home. He started to worry about that, watched out of the window..lights were flashing everywhere, hoping his mother could show up in any second...the street was quiet, but finally he saw a car coming towards the hotel. Until he saw two men in black suits coming out of the car...he knew what was going to happen, and ran onto the roof. Shaking in panic and sitting on the roof...he decided to escape the hotel.

  • DONOTCHANGE* had no where to go, lived as a homeless teenager.

after couple of moths...

Walking at the suburbs, he felt safe...when it went dark outside, he went to rob another store for food. After found a nice place to sleep, he started to eat his food. Quietly munching...looking everywhere...hearing every little noise...he saw a shadow coming behind a wall..

"must be a Bounty hunter spy looking for me"

He tried to stay as quiet as possible, thanks to wearing dark clothes, he was not noticed, and he could sleep safely...He sees bad dreams...wokes up sometimes in the night...and imaginating some paranormal things...he needs help...a true family..and safe place to be.


Chapter II - The truth

  • DONOTCHANGE* woke up at the place he fell asleep. Having a thinking look on his face, he gets up,

and thinks himself

"Enough, it's time to find out what is going on, i can't run for the rest of my life"

Hour after another, it goes dark outside, *DONOTCHANGE* figuring out a plan. He's sneaking in the streets, trying to hide from everyone, at midnight he's moving near The Police Department. A BPA (Bretonian Police Authority) officer guarding at the front door, walking around the area.

"I have to do it, there's no other way..."

and *DONOTCHANGE* attacks the police officer from behind and hits him in the head with a wooden stick. trailing him quietly but quickly into a dark corner of the street, checking his pockets and finds a plastic card with a code written on it

"This must be the key into the building..."

He also grabs the officer's pistol, a flashlight and goes into the building.

While sweating and being scared he keeps moving in a corridor. The closer he gets to the end of the corridor the louder noises are going. He sees flashing lights from a window into a room, whiel going closer he realises that it's a lab there. He's passing the room and goes upstairs, gettin on to the third floor he freezes...signing the flashlight onto the door... glowers it and whispers to himself

"Cabinet 107..police director..that's it.."

He managed to break into the room, paper stuff everywhere. He foraged all the shelfs, and finally found something he was looking for, information of the investigation about his family.

  • DONOTCHANGE*'s reading a bit of the following text and finds out that his dad was working for pirate faction(s), not

sure which one(s) but suspecting a group called "Mollys". His dad, Paul, gathered them information about whatever they needed to. He had a bounty on his head, and a mercenary (Name: CLASSIFIED) collected it. Although there's no information about his mother.

While reading this, *DONOTCHANGE*'s face is got a sad look, tears were falling. But the information he received about his family and all that hunting made him satisfied. Still wondered....

"Why are they still after me...


Chapter III - Leaving behind the bad life

Walking down in the street of a suburb, having a laser gun in his pocket, randomly going towards.. step after a step...suddenly he heard a sound of many cars approaching towards him.

"Please..not again..."

He started to run faster than he ever has ever run before...trying to escape in tight dark streets. Bretonian Police Officers following him very quickly. He ran fast enough so he had a little advantage, while he was running and looking back he tumbled on something, and blacked out.

The next day...He opens his eyes...trying to get up..

"Ouch...my back..."

"Easy there boy." Said an old man from the other side of the room.

  • DONOTCHANGE* was a bit scared...until he noticed he is safe.

"Who are you, why am i here?" Asked *DONOTCHANGE* desperately.

"The name is Jonathan, just Jonathan, and i saved you from the police" replied the old man.

"....I...thank you a lot Mr. Jonathan, my name is..."

"I know who you are son, and i also know about your family. Your life is complicated *DONOTCHANGE*, local bounty hunters killed both of your parents, and now the police is looking for you because you broke in to the Police Department, you know...all newspapers writing about you son." Explained Jonathan.

"Thanks again Mr but i should go and leave this city, i must go far from here, to find good and peaceful life."

"Yes, i know boy, i used to work for the government and i got some good relationships. I already called some agents to take you into a safe place, they'll be here soon"

After 10 minutes, they hear a sound of a copter. Jonathan and *DONOTCHANGE* goin onto the roof.

"But why are you helping me Jonathan?

"Because i knew your father very well, there's no time to talk about this, now go son, don't watch back."

  • DONOTCHANGE* listens to Jonathan, and enters the copter. He feels much better and safely...having a smile on his face..

"Finally something good happened to me."


Chapter IV - New Life

4 Years Later..

  • DONOTCHANGE* was taken to Omega-49...to start a new life...completely new life.

After a very long trip, he found himself on Planet Gran Canaria. Started working as an equipment dealer. He learned much about weapons and vessels.

Life was better on Gran Canaria, he earned nicely, bought a Mining Ship, and started to work as a miner. Learning to fly a spaceship was hard, but he was tough. With experianced pilots he learned to fly quickly, and mining operations began. Flying in clouds and asteroid fields were frightening him, fortunately, he flew with a team. Relationships with the Zoners became better and better.

Suddenly..one day Zoner patrols received a message about an incident at Freeport 9. Engineers, medics and repairing ships were needed, but the bases near Freeport 9 did not have enough equipment needed. *DONOTCHANGE* also went to help fellow Zoners. A Rescuing group launched as fast as possible from Planet Gran Canaria. It was a long trip to Omicron Theta system. Finally they arrived at Freeport 9, the station had been attacked, smoke and flames were everywhere. People who got hurt were taken back to Gran Canaria. With help of The Order, the station was repaired, *DONOTCHANGE* payed his roll there too.

After everything was fine again, *DONOTCHANGE* was having a drink in the bar of freeport 9. Sitting alone behind a table. Then, a man entered the bar, a man named John Chrichton (one of the zoners who founded the Zoners Trading Consortium). He was looking around in the bar, finally his eyes stopped at *DONOTCHANGE*, then walked next to him, introduced himself:

"Greetings Mr.Raag, my name is John Chrichton"

"Hello Mr.Chrichton. What can i do for you?" Asked *DONOTCHANGE*.

"I'm here to invite you to The Consortium" Replied John slowly.

"I see...well, im listening"

They had a long conversation, later Mr.Chrichton introduced other members of the consortium.

  • DONOTCHANGE* accepted the invitation and became a part of it.

In 4 months, *DONOTCHANGE* had a family and wanted to enjoy his further life with his wife Jessica and his daughter Jane. But...something made *DONOTCHANGE* to come back...did he miss to fly in space? Work in a station? Probaly yes. He joined back the Consortium now, and seems like he will never leave.