Difference between revisions of "Talk:Reapers of Sirius"
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:As for the the wording; I'm not sure, but I'm going to ask in the wiki editors skype chat about this. | :As for the the wording; I'm not sure, but I'm going to ask in the wiki editors skype chat about this. | ||
:--[[User:Alex|Alex]] 10:19, 11 February 2010 (MST) | :--[[User:Alex|Alex]] 10:19, 11 February 2010 (MST) | ||
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| + | :I believe the 10 pilots were codenamed the "Fallen Angels," not the threat. The wording was ambiguous, I think I have made it more clear. | ||
| + | :-- [[User:Eyvind|Eyvind]] ([[User_talk:Eyvind|Talk]]) 10:27, 11 February 2010 (MST) | ||
Revision as of 17:27, 11 February 2010
Edited some spelling and Grammar:
But im confused - there is a logic error in the outline of the story; it initially says that 10 pilots were created to "counteract" (ie fight) a Coalition threat named the "Fallen Angels" - Later, it seems that these 10 pilots and their descendants are the Fallen Angels?
That needs to be reworded somehow.. doesn't make sense at the moment.
Laowai
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- As for the the wording; I'm not sure, but I'm going to ask in the wiki editors skype chat about this.
- --Alex 10:19, 11 February 2010 (MST)
